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Janie, this is almost specifically aimed at u

cuz u kno i write, and u sayd u like my stories
 
some of u might remember, i posted the poem Toxic Marbles here
 
so here's a new poem (well, old but u ppl never heard it)
 
tis called: Trust
 

You told me things

You led me on

I trusted you

I gave you my heart

 

You took me for a ride

Told me your sick lies

And then when I was delusional

You said good bye

 

I didn’t know what to do

I cried all through the night

Tears streamed down my face

Nobody to say it’s gonna be alright

TELL ME WHAT U PPL THINK!Great expression, Star. I'm just wondering about "delusional" -- Keep writing. Think you have a gift.doesnt delusional mean confused or something similar?
i thought it did lol, (but i dont kno everything lol)
 
or did u mention it, cuz it doesnt rhyme?
i dont always try to rhyme, it's too hard
 
anyways, i thought it was the right word :P
lol
Delusional means that you believe something that is obviously untrue.  But it's got a bit of crazy attached to it. Like, you wouldn't say that someone that believes global warming is delusional.  But you might say that someone that believes Al Gore is an alien is delusional.oh so that's wat it means
well when i wrote:
 

You took me for a ride

Told me your sick lies

And then when I was delusional

You said good bye

i did delusional, like after the lies that the other person told the person, they were confuzed and didnt know what was really happening, does that make sense?
 
its sorta hard to explain wat i meant
 
like, um, they thought the bad person was good, when obviously to everyone else he wasnt, but they thought he was cuz he lied alot
 
does it make sense? lol, im confuzed
I'm probably off-base here in your shades of meaning, but would this work?

dis·il·lu·sion (ds-lzhn)
tr.v. dis·il·lu·sioned, dis·il·lu·sion·ing, dis·il·lu·sions
To free or deprive of illusion.
n.
1. The act of disenchanting.
2. The condition or fact of being disenchanted.
disil·lusion·ment n.
disil·lusive (-sv, -zv) adj.
The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language, Fourth Edition copyright ©2000 by Houghton Mifflin Company. Updated in 2009. Published by Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.
disillusioned [ˌdɪsɪˈluːʒənd]
adj
having lost one's ideals, illusions, or false ideas about someone or something; disenchanted
Collins English Dictionary – Complete and Unabridged 6th Edition 2003. © William Collins Sons & Co. Ltd 1979, 1986 © HarperCollins Publishers 1991, 1994, 1998, 2000, 2003
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