Saturday Evening Poem | Arthritis Information
We're going to venture into the darker side again tonight, nothing cheerful yet...
This Poem, as of now is untitled:
I feel the cold air
Blow against me
As I walk
Up the hill
I can see
My breathe
I whisper a word
Speak it to the world
I touch the gravestone
Feel the hard surface
Take a tissue from my pocket
Wipe a tear from my eyes
Sit on the hill
Next to your grave
As I watch
The sunrise
The beauty of nature
I experience it all alone
I wish you were with me now
But you’re gone now
I’m all alone, on my hillside throne
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I'm not sure about the last line: I'm all alone, on my hillside throne
idk if i want it, wat do u think?
HI Star I love it, I think "hillside throne" is great and would be an apt title! Keep going hugs from Janie.
omg Hillside Throne would be a good title
the title i made was, The Hillside Sunrise
but i thought about ur idea for the title, it's brilliant
i think i'll use Hillside Throne for the title probably
thnx Janie, glad u like it :)
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