Saturday Evening Poem | Arthritis Information

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We're going to venture into the darker side again tonight, nothing cheerful yet...

 
This Poem, as of now is untitled:
 
 

I feel the cold air

Blow against me

As I walk

Up the hill

 

I can see

My breathe

I whisper a word

Speak it to the world

 

I touch the gravestone

Feel the hard surface

Take a tissue from my pocket

Wipe a tear from my eyes

 

Sit on the hill

Next to your grave

As I watch

The sunrise

 

The beauty of nature

I experience it all alone

I wish you were with me now

But you’re gone now

I’m all alone, on my hillside throne

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I'm not sure about the last line: I'm all alone, on my hillside throne
idk if i want it, wat do u think?
HI Star I love it, I think "hillside throne" is great and would be an apt title!  Keep going hugs from Janie. 

omg Hillside Throne would be a good title

the title i made was, The Hillside Sunrise
 
but i thought about ur idea for the title, it's brilliant
i think i'll use Hillside Throne for the title probably
 
thnx Janie, glad u like it :)

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